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Finding Sonic Chp. 12

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    Chapter 12: Searching For Sonic…Again.


Somewhere on Black Doom’s spaceship…Sonic wakes up to find himself on the floor in some room. ‘Wha…Where am I? Who am I? I can’t seem to remember anything except this girl in my head. Who is she?’

“I see you’ve finally awakened. What seems to be troubling you Sonic, my son?”

Sonic turned to look in the direction that the voice had come from. “Ok…So let me get this straight. My name is Sonic and you’re my father?” Sonic asked with a look of puzzlement.

“Yes…That is correct.” Black Doom lied.

“Ok…” Sonic pauses for a few seconds and then notices a black and crimson streaked hedgehog at the far end of the room. He seemed to be gazing out in window with an expression of hatred on his face. The blue hedgehog then turns back towards the dark alien creature and says, “Who’s that?” Sonic points towards Shadow.

“That’s your brother.” Black Doom seemed to be enjoying lying to him. It made him feel even more superior.

“Oh…Uh…Where are we?”

“You’re on a spaceship headed for the black comet. Once we get there, the both of you will use your powers to bring the comet back to a planet so we can finally rule it.”

“What’s so important about this planet anyway?” Sonic asked, starting to act like his usual cocky self.

Black Doom grinned evilly at this remark and quickly turned towards the black and red hedgehog. “Shadow would know, now wouldn’t he?

Shadow turns to face them and instantly remembers all the painful memories with him and Maria. The dark hedgehog tried to push the thought away but they wouldn’t leave him. After remembering the horrible scene once again, he couldn’t help but feel anger and remorse for what had happened.

The black alien noticed this right away and tried to build up Shadow‘s hatred even more by saying, “Yes…You remember what those people did to you, don’t you Shadow? We must destroy those fools and show what power we possess.”

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Amy finally stopped from where she was running in the halls as she heard a couple of voices in the room right next to her. She then turned towards Tails and Knuckles and exclaimed, “ Hey! I think I found them!” Before either the fox or echidna could object, she quickly ran into the room while shouting out, “Sonic! Sonic…!”

Sonic noticed her right away but he didn’t seem to recognize her. “Who is she?”

“Oh…Nobody important! Just get rid of her!” Black Doom ordered. He didn’t want to give him a chance to remember who she was.

“As you wish!” Sonic obediently answered.

Amy looked on in horror. ‘He really did get brainwashed.’ She thought sadly. ‘There’s got to be some way to get through to him.’ “Sonic! Don’t listen to him! Don’t you remember? It’s me! Amy!”

“I don’t know what your talking about! Now get out of here if you know what’s good for you!” Sonic shouted out. He actually sounded a bit angry.

Amy couldn’t help but feel worried at this point. Nevertheless, she wouldn’t give up. “Sonic no! You can’t give up to Black Doom that easily!”

“And why not?! He is my father. And besides, I don’t even know who you are. Why should I trust you?”

Amy looked as if she were about to cry right now, but she held it in.
“Because he’s lying to you and because… I love you.”

“Sorry to disappoint you but I don’t love you.” Sonic replied without any feeling whatsoever.

“How can you say that?!” Amy snapped back angrily and at the same time sadly. At this point, her eyes started to tear up. “You’ve saved my life so many times before and even got your memory erased just to save me.”

“So tell me, how can you not love me?” Amy demanded. “Please… You have to remember.” The pink hedgehog was practically pleading with him now.

Black Doom was furious with her at this point and decided that he wasn’t going to risk his devious plan any longer.

“That’s enough out of you! If he says he doesn’t love you then just accept it! Now…Any more interference and I’ll make sure your dead!” Black Doom shouted out angrily.

Right after he said that, Tails and Knuckles show up beside Amy.

“I don’t think you’ll be hurting anyone until you get past Tails and me first!” The red echidna announced while cracking his knuckles.

Black Doom laughs at this and says, “Do you honestly think you can stop me?” “Sonic! Shadow! Take care of these annoying pests!”

Shadow immediately follows Black Doom’s orders, but Sonic is still standing in the same place, thinking about what Amy said. ‘There’s something about that girl that’s oddly familiar, but I can’t figure out what.’


Black Doom notices that Sonic hasn’t moved from where he was standing and is immediately angered. “Sonic! What are you doing?! I gave you an order! Now do as I say!”

I don’t want to hurt her but somehow I have to listen to him. Sonic thought sadly, but at the same time, he couldn’t seem to stop the mind control. “Sorry. I’ll take care of it!”

“Good, because were just about ready to land on the comet. So…Hurry up!”

Sonic starts walking towards Amy but Knuckles runs right in front of her. “Sonic! Snap out of it! I don’t want to have to hurt you.”

“Ha! Ha! Bring it on!” Sonic exclaimed in excitement. Whether he was good or bad, he still seemed to have the same cocky attitude.

Knuckles and Sonic were about to fight but Amy quickly ran between the two of them and shouted, “Stop this now! I can’t bear to see either of you get hurt because of me.”

Knuckles growled slightly at hearing this and said, “Amy… Just get out of here before you get hurt!”

“No! I don’t care!” She starts crying. “There has to be some good left in him!”

Black Doom got so fed up at this point that he decided to use his powers to strike at Amy. Sonic then, for some reason that can not be explained, runs in front of Amy to take the blow.

“You fool! Why did you do that?!” The dark alien stated and asked angrily.

“I…I…don’t know…” Sonic answered, shocked himself.

Amy gasped at what just happened. “Sonic! Are you okay?”  

“I’m…fine. I couldn’t let him hurt you. Somehow I know there’s something familiar about you.” Sonic answered sincerely.

Black Doom however, wasn’t the least bit happy about this. “I see my brainwashing hasn’t fully effected you. Oh well… If you won’t work for me then I’ll just have to destroy you!”

“So…You did brainwash me! You liar! Your gonna get it now!” Sonic answered angrily.

Black Doom just laughed at this and said, “Go ahead! Try! You’ll just fail!”

Sonic quickly runs towards Black Doom, but right when he’s about to spin dash into him, Black Doom disappears by using Chaos control.

“ Huh? Where’d you go?!” Sonic questions in surprise.

“Sonic Watch out! He’s right behind you!” Amy quickly warned.

But it was too late, as usual. Sonic was hit pretty hard on the head and then passed out.

Black Doom smirked at Sonic’s useless attempt and then turned towards his friends with a dark look on his face, and said, “Let that be a lesson to all of you!” The dark creature then turned to Shadow and said, “Now…Shadow…Lets get the job done, shall we?”

“Yes father.” Shadow answered emotionlessly.

Right after he says that, Black Doom and Shadow Chaos Control to the Black Comet.

Knuckles and Tails tried to stop them, but it ended up being a useless attempt. For by the time they caught up to Doom and Shadow, it was already too late.

Amy ignores this however and sadly glances over to Sonic. “Oh…Sonic…This is all my fault!” She then runs beside Sonic and starts bursting in tears. “Please wake up…Please…”

Sonic starts to wake up from hearing Amy cry and drowsily says, “Huh? Wha…? Amy?”

The rose colored hedgehog quickly notices this and in a happy manner says, “Oh…Sonic…Thank goodness your okay!” She then hugs him so tight that Sonic felt like he’d burst any second.

“Amy…Let…Go…” Sonic slowly answered while gasping for air.

Amy noticed this and quickly withdrew her tight embrace on Sonic. She couldn't help but giggle at this and then said, “Oh…Sorry.”

Sonic smirked at this and politely said, “ Heh… That’s okay.”

Amy and Sonic then seemed to gaze into each other’s eyes  for the longest time and finally, when their lips were barely an inch apart, Sonic made the first move, and kissed her. It seemed that it wasn’t just any old kiss though. This time it was out of pure love.

Both the yellow fox and red echidna couldn’t help but grin at this. Knuckles knew that they better hurry up though if they were ever going to stop Shadow and Doom. So, while trying to keep his seriousness, he walked up to Amy and Sonic and said, “Uh…Sorry to interrupt but…What about Shadow and Black Doom. Your not just gonna let them take over this world are you?”

Once Sonic realized that both him and Amy were being watched the entire time, he blushed a bright crimson, and then quickly tried to hide his embarrassment by turning the other way. After a few seconds, he was finally able to bring back his usual composure and said, “Right! We’d better do something and quick! Only problem is… what?”
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Dun! Dun! Dunn! Now what’ll they do?! Sonic’s back to normal but Shadow isn’t! Can they stop Shadow from making the biggest mistake of his life or will Black Doom take over this world? Find out next time in Finding Sonic!
Here's the next chapter of Finding Sonic. Hope you all enjoy!^^ And please remember to comment on this if you fav it. I like to know other people's opinions of my stories. And maybe some advice as well.;)

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~Caroline^^

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It was an interesting twist with Black Doom. That was one of my main reasons. :)